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This is a redraw of a picture I drew two years ago.
I am a huge SnapexLily shipper and I liked how the old image had alot of potential, so I decided to update it.

EDIT: Thanks for the critique, guys. There was more to fix then just her mouth, so I did. Thank you.

Harry Potter and characters © JK Rowling
Image is mine

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:iconrhionne:
Nice! I love this pairing hehe!

Hm, you could perhaps make her mouth slightly open to give it a little more expression? :)
:iconolivelovessnape:
I actually really like her expression. It shows her being concentrated on asking a question, and completely oblivious to Snape's affection.

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Ah you’re awake! I was afraid you were dead. That would have been rather awful, you know, being tied to a dead man.
:iconbexter-thelil-ferret:
brilliant stuff... i'm not sure advice from me would be too much help but the best thing i do is take my time on one thing and try to get it perfect e.g. using different styles, colours, shading and lighting etc. :shrug: i dunno lol :D

love snapes face btw :)

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I'm not insane, my mind just tells me that I am but I dont believe it because I told myself that I wasn't insane and I believed me.
:iconoate:
If you want Lily to look thoughtful, maybe try parting her lips a little bit. Not so that she's gaping, but so that a little bit of her teeth show. Tilting her head back a little to look at what she's reaching for might add some expression too.

Snape looks so adorable, by the way! Nice job.
:iconundeaddeviation:
Wonderful work!
I love the way you contruct your characters, its very unique.
And your coloring technique is phenomenal!

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DON'T PANIC

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:iconeicats:
I think the lack of expression you're stuggling with stems from the mouth--because it's closed and flat, it looks like she's trying to keep her face blank. If you had her mouth open in a different pose, or just added a slight upturn (or frown, if that's what is intended) then you would have it! It wouldn't take much...just a little change in either direction and the expression would be there (the eyes and eyebrows are already showing expression and will add to it).
:iconquicksilverwitch:
I love it!! *drools over Snape* Maybe if you made her bite her lip more, or wave her hand more drmatically in a Hermione-esque way??

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"It's a good thing to turn your mind upside down now and then, like an hour-glass, to let the particles run the other way."

-Roger Mifflin
:iconnashiko:
I really love this!

As for Lilly, maybe a curve of the lip? Her eyes are really expressive, but there's something off about her mouth. Or I could be totally off.
:iconsuni-moon:
Wow, I would critique, but I'm totally lame with crits.
Especially when the person is a better artist then me, I don't feal right critiquing. ^^;

But...I would say that Lily's mouth is all that needs changing for the expession....Her eyes are just perfect.

Anyway, SnapexLily FOREVER!

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"A sock. I don't need this, you can have that back now." ~Gerard Way
On May 21st Suni saw MCR live.
'Twas the best night of her life.

They're coming to take my away, ha! ha!

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:iconthe-grass-is-greener:
*sob* oh snape, *sob*

I LOVE IT

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